The edits here were made to strengthen the text, as well as implement the publisher’s
style rules related to the use of the term, “service-oriented architecture.”
In addition to edits to correct punctuation and spelling per the publisher’s style rules, this
paragraph also includes suggested edits to the first sentence to clarify its intended meaning.
This paragraph includes one inserted comma, suggested for readability.
“SOA” had already been introduced and did not need to be written out again.
Additional changes seek stronger word usage and correct spelling per the publisher’s style rules.
The edits here were suggested to strengthen the text’s meaning, as well as introduce stronger
punctuation and implement the publisher’s style rules for the term, “BPM suite.”
The edits here were suggested to streamline the flow of text for the reader, correct
capitalization per the publisher’s style rules, and insert missing punctuation.
The edits here keep the text “parallel” (“the first section” / “the second section” / “the third section”)
throughout the paragraph, as well as make the action stronger by streamlining text — for instance, changing
“will describe” to “describe.” Punctuation and capitalization issues were also corrected.